this is utter ....e! only joking! its me you fool! nice stuff dude, GET THE .... IN TOUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Good stuff! I think this is some great stuff! Good job! Resonant Tones

yup still 2 short mr :P great vocals dude nice and gravely cool acoustic :) nice stuff bro thumbs up

Good track dude and too short as the folk say and I fink yer vox sounds dead good - mebbi a little too much reverb - mebbi it could be a tad dryer but its qual stuff and gets a rate

I totally agree make it a full song, it's great! Will wait to hear more, you have some interesting vocals, nice..

sounds to me like a great song gettin started, then it stops, as you say it WAS an intro to your last demo ! why not make it a full song! i for one would be looking forwart to hearing it, sorry if it's not what you wanna hear, just being honest m8, vocals are superb as is the guitar, really catchy tune, just like to hear MORE !! cheers matt

Another solo classic, even with the ubrupt ending. Have you plans to extend, I hope so Steve

This is a cool song - definitely sounds like an intro...it's crying out for the track to kick-off just as it ends. Go on Jaymz - let it soar!! Martin

still lovin it :) nice and gritty cool guitar just needs extending ;)

Now this is a gem. Simple and so sweet. A true songwriting showcase, it has it all. Love the vocals on this, and great guitar. Too bad it's so short a song.

Good vs. evil huh? lol... I'm game! I adore your songwriting, love this tune! :) Carol Sue

Hi Jaymz Lee Shaw! (smalllife) I know I had listened to the wonderful sounds of smalllife - didn't know you were one of the same so I will have to go and listen to the "I am the master" song you mentioned on your comment to my song "I am invisible" I listened to this song twice - I really like your sound! Smooth vocals and all! Very very nice! I will add to my favorites so I can listen more later! And...did you paint the picture on your page here? Have a creative day! Thumbs up! Carol Sue

Love this track, and I agree with some of the comments below as I am left wanting more!

yeah for a shortie, this leaves ya wanting more....your voice is delicious

wicked track m8 gr8 vocals but i already said i like your voice :D love the rawness to it nice and filthy sounding another cool track bro gets my rate little shrt tho took me longer to type this than the track 2 play

awesome brother. great melodies, great voice. i still want to collab.

Nice melodies, great tone and expression in your vocals.

Good ol' Northern English indie! There's nothing like it! Top notch song,the vocals are particularily interesting...rated and added to me faves,Keep up the good work Jaymz-Best wishes from the Shed!

You have a what I would describe as a natural singing voice, very listenable. Great song. Regards: Fatal X 8 ~ AKA ~ Destri

I really liked the voices, they blend really well with the guitars. Wow, this is really short. :-) Let me hear it again.... I also liked the lyrics, very realistic. I noticed some "hits" behind the guitars...is it some percussion or the guitar player hiting somewhere on the mic? Very enjoyable track. Good work!

Great stuff

Really liked this. Vox are fab, guitar playing is right on. Oh, it finished! Wasn't expecting it to be *this* short! Nice work, though :)

Good track. Like someone stated it seemed to get cut off too quick. Although I have seen alot of other musicians incorporate these little intros. I have one myself that sometimes I play by itself and people seem to enjoy it. I don't have it recorded but I play it live.

this is really good, nice lyrics

Great this one Jaymz - great playing and vocals original. Glad you re=posted this one. Rgds. Mike.

Hey Jaym,,,,I could listen to this style of music all day long. It's unfortunate that it stopped so suddenly,,,I would have been great if was a bit longer...oh well,,,I'll have to go and play it again won't I? I love the guitar playing,,,,very fond of it. I note by previous comments that you might not have thought of yourself as a singer. ...Well, I think you should stay with it. You've got a fine voice and it does the song well. Good music!

nice track, short and very sweet :)nice guitar, i enjoyed your voice in this one ;)

Has a clean retro sound to it. Wonderful production.

i like this style of vocals. I think your voice sounds great. im interested as to how the voice might sound with parts in chourus opposed to the whole track.when i listen to tracks im always thinking remix, that is just the nature of how my electronic mind works. im always listening for elements that i love. for this track it would have to be the guitar progression. i think it would suit well as a sample. my personal opinion is that the vocals are talented, but not quite right yet on this track...i wish i had more advice as to what to do with them. i think its the right voice and everything so i am actually confusing myself so i will leave

An epic version is coming soon! I promise - will ben rocorded in november. Cheers

Came back through your backyard man..still a class track...well short though my friend - can you make an 'epic' version? lol...take it easy man, peace.

Yo J-z. It's me - the G. I told ya you could sing - listen to what the people say! (i'm still singing my songs with the band though dude!) G

I dont know whats wrong with my voice - ive just never really rated it - but thanks people - im touched! I get something else on here so u can check that - cheers!!!

So what's wrong with your voice? I think it suits the music really well. Good song, good mood setter. It gets the melancholy across. Well done.

Very good man..nice feel to the track..the tones are real good. I love a sad piece of music..now, where are these oatcakes? ;)

short but nice... Hey that's what my girl said last night ;)