Songwriter from Stoke-on-Trent
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The Parasites of Paradise (demo)
Ahh, a breath of fresh air with this one, love the vocals in it, takes me on a lovely little journey. Class stuff!!! : )
Hi there, Greg~ I wanted to come by and thank you very much for your recent visit (thank you!) I also listened to your song, and it's quite dear, you know~ I'm hearing much enthusiasm, and promise from you! Keep making the music, and writing those clever, catchy lyrics! =Kudos= :)
Appreciate the feedback and encouragement. PJ/ATP - it's nice to know people are coming back for another listen :)
Had to come back to this song for another listen. Love the lyrics and the uplifting chorus. PJ
High Greg,great to see you're still making music, read the comment about you having to record vocals in secret and thats hard. How about going down the instrumental road,as Andy said, all the right bits... Musically, you have an Owl City feel and i think and the production is first class, hope it all goes well, Gibbo.
Hi Greg. I haven't checked out your profile before but I am really impressed with the amount of demos that you have recorded. This song has brilliant lyrics and has a sweet melody as well as a highlighting chorus. Love the title too. I very much enjoyed listening to this track and I hope that things are going well with you and your music. Voted. PJ
Greg oh Greg! The music is sublime with all the right bits in the right place. The lyrics are difficult to sing as on occasion there are two many words packed into a small place.If this was an instrumental I think it would stand alone. However, your vocals spoil the track as I have to confess you are not a singer. But as a songwriter you are tops. Please don't be offended but the truth is fact. There are some flat notes which are difficult to assess. If you got someone else to sing the lyrics you would have a winner here. TAke heart my friend Andy :)
Songwriter from Stoke-on-Trent looking to find others to share his passion for creating music.
Influences: primarily – James, The Stone Roses, Elbow; generally – The Charlatans, Oasis, The Beatles, The Kinks, U2, etc; and also – Buddy Holly and Neil Diamond.
Twenty tracks have been added to my profile, and the three original tracks updated. Have a listen - support and constructive feedback both welcome!