Alive WIP - would welcome some honest feedback.

Hello

Have got a number of WIPs that i'm going to upload over the next few weeks for feedback purposes. This is the first - an acoustic based track called "Orchid". Brutal honesty preferred

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Thanks for the comments on "Jazz Deux" - have not had a lot of time recently to reply or to listen to the latest uploads on MP3u but intend to start catching up from tomorrow.

[alive]

Thanks to Dan, Craig, Rich, Andy and Terry for the constructive feedback. I really appreciate you taking the time to give this WIP a listen and leave your thoughts on how to improve the track. This is one we intend to revise in the very near future. Cheers

[Michael Ritchie]

Left you some words on "Orchid"!