the groove is nice..with a little practice you could improve. check me out and tell me what think. andrell

There are two fundamental flaws in your vocal performance. The first is the bland weakness of your delivery, and the second is your complete lack of ability to stay in tune with yourself. Needs a lot of work.

Hey, man. Thanks for being open minded to some techno. Great attitude! Okay up to your song. Good beginning. You got an excellent voice, I'm not kidding... but the effects need some work. Just a wee bit too much reverb on my end. I don't know if you wanted that way so it could just be personal opinion :)! I like the lyrics. Makes me want to just friggin' grab my woman and take her back into... Okaaaay, moving on... I really don't want to sound like I'm cutting down your song. I just like to be honest with what my ears are hearing :). The claps are a good choice but seem plain. Maybe adding some depth in them would help a lot. Kick sounds good but I think you could get more bang for the buck out of them. It could just be the overuse of the reverb, though. All in all, I liked the tune. Everything was in the right place. I understood the mood and the good groove. Real nice ideas set forth for this track. I'll give you a rating, man. Have a great day and good luck with everything! :D

Very nice groove going on,agree with others that the vox is alittle far away, but still a nice jam, fix them vocals and its gonna be hot ! Will listen to more of ya tunes soon, peace

I'm not a fan of Rn'B either, but this sounds like a decent example of the genre. I personally think the reverb on the vocals is a little OTT. Nice melody and arrangement though. Rated. Craig

cheers for the comments on my track...just here to return...as you know im not much of a fan of R&b; but this is done very well...nice groove to it...and a good vocal performance...good work all round thumbs up

I am gonna moreor less say the same as the others....your vox are superb but u sound like you are a long way away...come closer honey...you are so cute!!! Also post the lyrics for lil ole me eh? Definitely rating it cos I like your sound but I have a feeling the lyric's gonna be a bit repetitive for my taste...and you know my taste de Shawn!!

It's a smooth track this, now I always have problems with genres, (and it never changes) r and b??,I am always confused by that description, like indie as well, what does it mean? co's it ain't rythm and blues is it??? more soul in my opinion, and reminiscent of some of those smooth classic soul tunes of yesteryear, or at least that's what your vocal style reminds me of, overall a very nice song, I personally quite like the way you have mixed the vocals back in the mix with that reverb, anyway I enjoyed it, gets a rate fom me.

Good beat, I agree with mel tho, vox volume could come up, also on this site it's a good idea to post lyrics, I didn't do it til was requested so naturally it was hard to follow my flow, I like this beat too, I don't normally get into the RnB scene, I always like "Contagious" tho, Mr.Biggs put it down, rtd you!

this has such a sweet flow to it but yeah would love to hear your vox mixed a little closer to my ear...very sexy song imo:)

Hi, Great jam! Love the vocals and harmonies...so powerful and moving..so well-controlled. Very catchy melody too. The only thing I would say is that in my humble opinion, it sounds "live" ...the track sounds clean, but not "near" (it sounds a bit distant at least on my computer)...production-wise I would love to hear a track by track studio version. But still...very nice work! Cheers, Smudge from Smudgie