First time we've heard any of your music and this track has a very haunting feel and works really well with the lyrics and vocal style. Enjoyed

Hey, Your vocals for some reason reminds me of tricky ( from Massive Attack) in this tune. Im feeling this track,i get a hip-hopish/chilled out type of vibe from the beat & vocals. Good mix of both, niceone

Well... Nice to meet you, Mark! I'm Andy. I really like the pad kinda synth sound in the beginning. That's a really atmospheric sound. And that cracking 1/2 beat clap/snare sounds very good. I like how you slowly creep in those strings. They become a little too loud when they peak out at times and it's hard to hear your awesome deep, dark tone in this. I can still hear it! But maybe toning the strings down could show the darkness of your voice a little better as it seems that's what you want to portray with your voice. Which I think is brilliant by the way! I really like the lyrics a lot. My wall falls down a little once in a while, too. But when you want someone back, that's just the pits, man. But this is one heck of an instrumental electronic song. I really dig the dark atmosphere of the song. Even though I think the strings could be turned down, it doesn't take away their purpose at all. What I like a lot about having those strings there is that they sound sad. They go along with the theme of the song perfectly and embed more emotion to the song. That is a very good idea. Sweet job with the creativity. All in all, production wise. It's a solid, bright, full sound. Mix wise, you may want to pay attention to the volume of the strings. I don't mean any critic harm in any way. Just giving off a suggestion is all. If you like the strings that way, man, keep them it's your song. The arrangement had not a thing wrong with it. I might have liked a better ending but and ending's and ending. I'm just a little picky about them is all. It shows me that the artist worked hard from start to finish. Not saying you didn't work hard. Just saying... :) I think it's a really cool song. Nice and dark. Gets into the soul. Not many songs do that for me and a lot of people don't understand the concept. You do and that's a VERY good trait to have when you make music. Fine start, man. It was a pleasure to stop by. Have a great day! :)

Cool track mate. Very chilled. Kinda like a cross between massive attack and the streets. I would be interested in lending some vocals/guitar if you want? I'm not great but i'm in tune! Most of the time! Let me know if you fancy it. Great track anyway. Look forward to hearing more. Ant.

Like the overall laid back feel to this - has a haunting undercurrent that runs through it- I can imagine it on a film soundtrack. very good.

Dark..nice percs and strings.Like the 'chorus',thats gonna be goin round in my head all day:)

This is quite a refreshing sound you have. Little nit pick might be that the vocal rap is a bit low in the mix. The beat is wonderful and the pads are sweet with the right amount of emotional intensity. As this is Electronica you could try doubling the vocal and automating some panning, to give some variation and widen the mix. Even add some delays here and there. Good style you have though and I enjoyed the listen.

Welcome back, Mark! :) Chilled are you vocals, I like! Electronica-rap with some cool vibes! Would be easy to listen to this again. Way to go, more please! :)