nice feel , you have a talent for writing and producing, keep up the good work. nico

Hi Mark This is a pretty good pop song and there's a lot of promise. Vocally It's not great if I'm going to be honest but then It's a Demo. Musically Like MD1 says It's pretty decent and the arrangement is excellent. I would like to hear a girl singing this. maybe put out a call on this site. Cheers :-)

Cheesy maybe but also catchy. The vocal... I guess you sang it and it's a decent voice you got but you gotta record it more carefully trying to avoid some timing issues. You'll get better at it and then you'll feel confident about not using so much reverb. There's a strange fade-in on the vox that probably doesn't work either but WTF I'm an old rocker so ignore all me advice dude. I'm rating it cos it's catchy

i got to be honest...this is one the most weird things i have heard...musically pretty decent...vocally...i never heard anything like it in my life....do i like the vocals? i don't really know...to be fair i think not...is it male is it female? personally i would lose the vocals...they don't work in my opinion

The song itself is not cheesy, nor are the lyrics...but your voice sounds a little bit oversweet for this one...I have not found that in the other 2 I've just listened to so I am not sure if you were eating candyfloss or spoonfuls of syrup before you recorded this LOL Anyway, another well-written pop song Mark.

Dude love the vocals very smart lyrics

I agree with all of GETE's comment. It's a good track just needs the track bringing out more. Lyrics are very good. Gets a vote from me and my recommendation. Barry

its not that cheesy at least the vocals has a wee bit of thought,its not like your talkin about castles in the feckin sky:)its a nice throw back track cool breaks,likin the vocals in this,just think the music has to come a little more to the fore seems a tad drowned out by the vox,good wee number anyways