very easy 2 listen to trance track,nice bass to start and moves at a good pace rated.

Some good ideas through this, I like how the bass kick moves around a bit, the high arp sounds I think may need changing a bit, not sure if its just the tone of it or something, but that is just my take on it. Some good work here though, I have a feeling there will be many original ideas you will come up with. Look forward to hearing more. Sonya Stewart.

This isn't really a genre of music I go out of my way to listen to, but I haev to admit that this track is incredibly well produced and arranged. Top work.

Nice pumping track from the start, melodic and trancy! Definatly got some feeling in this. Nice produced track. Builds good like those high arps coming in after 1 minute. Maybe a bit more bassline to spice it up a bit...but thats just a suggestion....Great work!! R8!

Well it starts out very fast. Nice pace. The pickup line is very complicated and simply awesome sounding. You seem to be well at administering emotion. This has a lot of it. The bass line is very well done. The perks are very good sounding. They definitely are a piece of work. But... It's kind of hard to hear. Not too hard. Enough to know it's there but... Hmm... It's very quiet when everything else comes in. Might need a "*" of a tweak. Could just be my speakers... No problems. This is unfinished so I can understand there's going to be some here and there's to tweak. Maybe a slow down to bring in another synth would help. It's not too repetitive but it doesn't seem to change that much. Maybe adding some alternations. That's what I would do. :) Summing it all up. I'd say this is a very good piece of work. Kick is strong. Hats are well heard and not too high. Maybe some tweaking with the bass in the middle of the song would help. Other then that. Well effort! Here's a rating :)

This site does offer some great trance music and this is one fine track, I am no expert in this genre or any other, But I do like what I hear. Vin

Good work, loving the beats, some good synth work,not sure on the arp sound, think you could maybe use that more sparingly,overall it's a cool trance track, just needs a few more synths in there I think, not bad though...welcome to the site :)

yep sounds very good,arp lines are still sweet,bass very good now,still loud and clear,if you wanna beef the kik up google (cyanide vst) a free kik fx vst i found recently or check 1 of martys packs in the forums some nice kiks in that,personally i dont think the kiks that bad,still a nice we track,good work,

Welcome to the site newbie. Really like this track, this version a good improvement on the other. Love the synths, both arpeggio's and pads, and good melodies in there too. One small crit, although the bass has been improved over the other version i still think that kick drum could do with being beefed up a bit more and the ending is still way too abrupt. Anyway, good first post, enjoyed it. Rated. Craig

I also liked the 1st version but this is great. That bassline is very cool. Plenty of elbow grease gone into this version.rated Barry

enjoyed the first version, like this one even more, too many positives to go into on here, but I can really hear the work you have out into improving it. Great stuff, all good here,rated :)

Welcome to the site :) Lovely track, nice arps and it has a lovely flow to it. I would love to hear maybe a little more synth work in it, a few strings pads ect, but thats just my personal preference. Love the way the beat kicks in at around 5.55. Great work :D xxx

wow you really been working on this , i hear a sweet bass riff.. must say love your builds/ break downs .. sweet choice of synths.. nice arping sounds flowing round 3.11 my fav part of the tune hun, sweet building up to a banger of a mix ... production 100% clarity clear as a bell. rated!!!!!!! good luck with it hun neil :O)

right lol - i just noticed that ur 1st tune is the radio edit lmao - durr - great choons ;)

well produced, nice melody - nice arp's coming in :D nice layers there as well - b-line is sweet, quality choon lightning, u have a talent so more like this ! ;) rates from me. The only thing I would say is sometimes it is better to post up the "radio" edit so more people get a full flavour - but this is a great full mix and will be appreciated by a number of people round here. :D