I like this and the beat is perfect for this one...vox are a bit pitchy (harmonies too, in places) but really enjoyed the song...one of your best for sure

A rough diamond. Listen to the people on here, you have the qualities. Music is ace. Just a polish required on the vocal ( Some compression and control maybe ) other than that it's got a lot of potential. Well done. rated because i love reggae and this has all the qualities of being a big hitter. Barry

cool track, dude. lots of intersting ideas you have. Vocals tend to get over-excited in parts, though, and you got to watch for pitch, but then again this is a very difficult genre you're doing and you're young. I'd say your willingness to explore the boundaries of music-making is a fantastic thing, give me songs like this any day over someone sticking to "safe" material anytime. (but don't use that as an excuse not to correct the vox! hahaha)

Fine track and songwriting! Love your vocs and the warm feeling in this song. I find the refrain with the different voc layers especially catchy. Cool outro!

nice song sir!!! im at work so the listening envirornment isnt the greatest.. but i think just a tad eq to get rid of a bit of highs would make this much better.!!!! that aside the song is great!

wario n da house

keep doing your shimie, u are graeme brown, its my priviledge, to listen to your art. u really remind me of ben harper, and i dig mr harper

Hi Graeme, good to see you back around and still composing, musically has a real good feel factor, vocally parts of it needs a little work but definitely see potential in this, good stuff mate, rated.

great style. nicely put together. nice playimg along to this - I was waiying for the applause at the end;-). I think little production bits and pieces here and there would be nice but the talent still shows through - jon

great track m8! Agree on the vocals needing compression, but a nice listen all the same :)

Hi Graeme! Every time I hear you I think what great songwriting abilities you have! This is my fav. from what I have heard. This song as it is, is very nice. I think this song could be a lot bigger! Gave me a real good vibe! Bravo! :) Carol Sue + ~CarEss~

a really nice chilled track mate, i would pretty much agree with whats been said, keep it up dude. nice vox and instrumentation

Agree wiv Mick on vox but you've got a sweet sounding voice so work at it dude. It's worth it. OK a bit more bass volume needed and again on the vox use a little compression to keep the peaks down. Maybe the rhythm needs a little more punch to make it good. At 1 min 10 i wanted the song to explore a new vocal theme. Most good songs have at least 4 vocal themes and many have 5 or more - hey I'm a big culprit of not listening to me own advice so don't take it too seriously. And I've ad a beer so totally ignore wot i'm ranting about. The basic song is good - just needs little more polish.

its a great little song graeme.....well rpoduced, and a brill intro. Mibbi a litle pitch driftin on the vocals, but very slight.....but, on the whole not a bad song. mick