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16-04-2010, 16:50 PM   #1 (permalink)
Tokyo Dawn - Elusive Trance
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I'm still searching for that elusive trance track that i`m hoping is in me somewhere. Phil (MoonTurnedBlue) has been very generous and sent me a whole load of advice on Arps n progressions to which I`m enthusiastic if not a little slow to master.

Heres what I've learnt so far inspired by a beautiful sample of a Japanese Nightingale that I found. I`m no morning person but waking up to this wouldnt be so bad.

Ant

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Enjoyed the previous comments almost as much as the song! Almost makes me wish there were standards, like at a dog show or ballroom dancing competition for these genres to critique these songs properly. I've no clue what makes a proper "trance" piece, my only complaint with this one was it was too short!
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as always you bunch are just superb in dealing out the vital advice that I need just when I need it. I'll work darn hard on the next version of this WIP to ensure I get closer to what this genre is all about.
I must add that so far I`m impressed by how much technical subtelety goes into a Trance track so big respect to those of you out there who knock these out for fun

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Much like us both L...i found it elightening and gentle and uplighting, but that is all I can say

Could never write something like this. Far too much music theory involved
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Finished it - woohoooooo

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