Feedback I've had is this melody albeit nice is a little strong and its hard to create a vocal that has a melody that isnt lead too much by the track. I`m no fan of songs where the vocal directly follows the instrumental melody so trying an experiement here to see if I can maintain the essence of the original track whilst losing simplifying the colour of the original.
not easy to compose music for vocals when I dont sing myself or have an ear for a vocal melody - Time will tell I guess if I've succeeded
Ant
But you said (Vocal mix) WIP