I need honest reviews from the non-tonal challenged. Please!

[Michael Ritchie]

I uploaded some songs with the understanding that I might receive some honest reviews! So far, only one review on four songs. I would apprecciate any criticism constructive or otherwise. It all helps and can better my musicianship only with outside input! Please, if this is not a site friendly to my music I would be thankful to be let known as I will not waste more time.

Best Regards

MP3 Unsigned - The Best MP3 s from New and Unsigned Artists

[jaywilson]

I left feedback on 'That song rocks' and then the site bombed as I was trying to add a comment to 'Dadoola'.

Here's what I wanted to write:

Got a better groove here!

Timing's slightly suspect, you should listen to tjf if you really want to err in this area. The first rhythm guitar (or is it a bass played very high?) is doin' some outstanding work but gets lost because the second rhythm guitar takes away its punch.

Can add more but will wait for some feedback on my feedback, hope you're taking it all positively,