UK Based Singer/Songwriter/Composer/Producer covering many variations of Pop Dance and Rock.
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Underneath It All
Still a class tune, hope your ok, not heard anything from you for a bit. Rainy x
Yes P.D.....very nice voice indead! Aloha Tania, welcome to Unsigned!!!
Hi Tania, as you probably know, this site is great for feed back and I believe everyone tries to help other artists by given "constructive" critquing. By no means is this to put down your hard work but actually help if I may. I like your style but I do have to agree with Rakk. The snare is over powering your voice in areas and when listening to the song the areas in which Rakk might be hearing the off key notes is when you sing, 'crying on the FLOOR, the word, BLIND, all we need is LOVE, towards the ending not sure exactly, the word STRONG, and going ON. They all appear flat. Do you have a pitch corrector? Maybe if you put your vocal track alone through the pitch corrector you will see what I mean. There is one thing about a song that stands out and it is a "flat" note. Listen to the ending; the last "GIRL" is flat and really stands out. It doesn't even fit in the chord. As I stated, you have a nice style and correcting those areas would be very beneficial to the song. I hope this helps. If you want me to go over it again and let you know the markers where there are rough spots let me know. Otherwise, it was nice a song. Welcome to the site.
I can see the style of vocals used here in some major hot dance tracks. Nice voice and a pretty decent track. Again some very good ideas.
Hi Tania - P is for PRODUCTION! the snare is louder than the vocal in parts - you should be careful with that for pop cos the vocal is THE most important thing and there are a ton of off-key notes - re-record the vocal (I know you did it quick but present yourself better girl - you have a nice voice!. On the positive side I think you have a pop flavour to your composition and that is a good thing - some people just dont get HOW to write good pop and this IS good pop. Well done - my comments are honest and well thought through - not meant to offend so keep going cos I think you have a chance to make progress. Glad to hear you - Rakk.
The long awaited solo album from Tania Jaye has at last been swung into production with the first track On Your Own being written and had its first take recording in just 2 days! The completed version of this track will be available soon!