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Hi Stomp Guy,s Many thanks for your recent comments, even the Britney_whiz one,,, lol May i be so bold as to say i think you should rebuild this track,,, i can hear the track has some nice elements,"but many of them are clashing" & there is also a Tuning problem just before the 2 min Mark, i hope you dont mind me being so Honest guys,,,, but many times, i myself have gone back to the drawing_board with a track becuse some people have been just plain_honest,,,, it always helps !!!!...but somtimes at the cost of a little pride,,,& since i read your comment on my track, i to have gone back to the original file & corrected the file,,, lol L8trzzz Dudes,,,, hahaha
I had the volume way too low at first - was much better loud! This kind of leans toward psy trance - I would have preferred a drums/fx/perx intro and then building to that theme at around a minute - my browser won't show the time of the track now which is annoying - anyhow - I too was a bit irritated by those off key 12 tone moments - they don't seem to flow with the rest of the song. The first idea may have worked better if you had dropped it after the first breakdown - just fading it out after the intro didn't work for me. It is too strong to include in the intro - it is great the way you combine the two ideas though. The kick maybe could use a few more dbs - the bassline sounds fine. I guess those off key moments makes this stand out from the crowd a bit - you can't please all the people etc. Looking forward to hearing more from you guys.
like the filthy bass drop in the middle, def goes bangin' techno for a while there. btw i am an advocate of off key sounds if they work and tbh lads i think it sounds pretty good so ignore these pussies lol (just messin ppl) i think it all works based on it being more techno than trance. good one.
i liked the maddness toards the end,the ride on hat/crash (2:30 odds)doesnt work that well,maybe lightin it up a bit,think the 2nd bar of that sortsa phased sound needs looking at seems too outta tune,some good sounds tho the siren type noise (its at the very end as well )really like that,also the bass in the second half is real good, half decent track bit of fine tuning and yous are flying
*hmm.. That sounded very negative of me.. :p Don't take it personally.. I don't always explain myself very well.. The overall mix was good so definitely pat yourselves on your backs.. ;)
Sounds good except for one annoying part.. Sounds waayy off key some place in the middle before it breaks down.. That turned me off quite a bit.. Also, the crashes after that (to me) needs to be turned down a bit, but that's just me.. ;) Towards the end, everything sounds sort of chaotic.. Not sure what's up with it.. The ideas in this track are really good.. Just needs some revamping and tweaking.. ;) .:Dacheleigh:.
Well done FXMAN for being such a great mentor. Barry
Great track guys, great bass and love the trance/electro fusion. Love the Change at 2:06. Not keen on the off key work but hey-ho who am I to judge. If you like it, keep it:) Gets my vote as is cos it not far away from being a pounder. Love the X_Y at 4:06. Great stuff, keep em comin. Barry
hows it going lads? lol this has turned out ok... erm dont want no praize lads it was a pleasure helping your orig idea.. really makes a diff to work on a dance track than rather my trance genre ect i said dance cause it seems to fit dance genre to my lugs. rated cause i like the outcome of it.. not being bias ect.. best luck with it. peace !
very nice track guys! nice how it goes in a totally different direction from the middle. cool fx too, lol :) have a rate! mark
Lovin' the melodic bassline guys...nice change at the half way point, yes Neil seems to have sprinkled a little of his magic on this very listenable track. Nice work guys!