This is a cool accoustic track. I like you're voice which is unusual for me cos i'm very fussy when it comes to vocals! Good lyrics too. Can't really help much on the production side cos i'm still learning myself. I agree about there being too much reverb on the vox tho. I always do the same! Look forward to hearing more. rated.

Eric, A really nice song with wonderful sentiment. I am not versed in the production side(I have a mate with better ears than mine who does that for me)but it sounds okay to me.

You have a lovely voice and your lyrics are very clever....and I like the sweeguitar solo.A definate Rate....will look forward to hearing your other songs. Rated

sweet sweet vocals on this, good voice you have, gently strumming away this is really easy to listen to. I agree with Tony on suggestions for the effects on your vocals. Trust me, your voice doesnt need to hide behind all that reverb :) keep it up - rated and recommended. Debs

...for 'nned' read 'need', my typing's getting worse!

Lovely bit of strumming. Cool voice. In terms of production, doesn't nned much. Suggest (a) reduce or remove the reverb. It's not a particularly good reverb and there's a bit too much of it. (b) use a pop shield on the mic. (c) Use a close mic technique. Guitar work is very neat. Lovely song and good hook. Welcome to the site, let's hear more. Damn my HiFi amp just packed in again! See you around...

Nice. I like the way it's just sort of filling time... like whiling away the pause before one picks oneself up and tries again. Like your voice too.

I like the sentiments of the song and the simplicity of it .. Hope you enjoy being here. Stick your nose around in the forums so we can get to know you better.. Rob

Nice little song. Wish I had your voice. Nice upper register. The prod as you said needs work but I like it! Welcome. Dan