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Ffabbia
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Newly uploaded today:
The Delivery System - Never leave The Bathing Hut
This is piece of crafted, tortured and mangled funk, with a bitter
edge, shot through with fear, alienation and terrible loss of personal
security.
If anybody could spare the time to leave a comment, or provide any feedback I would be very grateful to you
Equipment used:
guitar
bass guitar
Fruity Loops
Midi keyboard
various effects plug-ins/VSTs etc.
microphone
Cool Edit Pro 2
Sound Forge
Lyrics:
Never Leave the Bathing Hut
The Delivery System
Corpus Misty Communications 04
The old class structures are breaking down, into the law of the gun,
And the noble pursuit of finding someone to shoot, and displace this upon.
And the sharks out there will rend and slash
And my mind in fear will bend and snap
And what does not appear is best held back
Armed and ready against attack
If someone hates me, well I deserve it
If the sharks locate me I’ll try to preserve it
They want to taste me and the risk aint worth it
But they come here anyway, to my home and burn it
And they’re dragging me, dragging me into the sea
Best to preserve anything of worth, in case they unearth what I hid even from my self
Yeah!
I failed the test in the first round, tried my best to find my own ground, but I failed that as well
Yeah
And now I’m dragged and gagged, nailed and stabbed and landed gutted on the sand
Yeah
And now I’m floating face down in the meltdown and the breakdown of all that I am
And they’re dragging me, dragging me into the sea
Pretty pretty plastic doll
Come close to me with your melting skull
Seduce and beguile in your death’s head style
Hide your leering sharks teeth under a plastic smile
Sneering and caustic, I watch you all the while
As they force me down into the filth and bile
And they’re dragging me, dragging me into the sea
And they’re dragging me, dragging me into the sea
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Just had a listen.I think the production quality is superb, love the bass guitar the vocals are very well recorded aswell.
Nice chill-out tune in my opinion.
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Thanks very much m8. Thanks also for your comments on the artist page.
Also got fantastic comments from Northcape, if you are reading this m8, thanks also 
I also like the bass guitar work, that riff was going through my mind
all day at work at the time of construction, and I was counting the
seconds all day in order to get home and get it recorded lol.
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A Quality TDS production!
I love the "dragging me...dragging me.." particularly powerful. And I also
love the little pizzicato highlights. And and and - just the whole track
really
Reminds a little of the sound from Silver Lining 
Nicci
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Did the commenting, did the voting. If someone squeezed and wringed you as they would a sponge, lyrics and poems would come out.
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love it Gary! I'd be just as excited to get that bassline recorded. Commented, voted, and soon to download. You have the most catchy voice, really stands out, another great attribute of your music.
Keep the creativity flowing,
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Nice one Ffab!!!! Great musical work and your vocal style is unique.
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Thanks very much everyone. It's good to have a few guys that take the time to regularly listen to my work, and I expect that all of you feel exactly the same about feedback on your own material....who wouldn't?
Steve - how are you getting on with those vocals m8? chomping at the bit to get 'Broken' finished here rofl!!!
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Sorry for the boink, but I would at least like to give this another day
to run before it sinks down into the unread obscurity of page 2.
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Threw me comment into the water earlier Gary ...
Rob 
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