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Slippy-T Suffering from MSGBoard RSI

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Posted: 14 December 2004 at 11:36pm | IP Logged
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Elo people ..
Well I finally nailed down a collab that has been sitting on me hard drive for a while..
My co perpetrator in this is my old friend Deggsy .. He
sent me the song a while back and I've kept coming back to it a bit at
a time and finally have got our 1st cut done..
I say this is the 1st cut 'cause Deggsy wants to have a rethink on the music.. so that both it and the vox sit better..
Although saying that this ain't half bad in my opinion.. and definitely
gives a better than fair idea of Deggsy superb musical abilities..
So if you could leave us an opinion or two it would be appreciated.
Sometimes
Many thanks
Rob 
Edited by Slippy-T on 14 December 2004 at 11:49pm
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Will listen shortly and leave coments on the page!
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Slippy-T Suffering from MSGBoard RSI

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Sure yer a grand fella so ya are .. ..
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voted now too.
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Hi Rogue,
Thanx for your comments and vote m8, i personally think the music could do with a little improvement,there is summit missing i think,after the vocals have been added,just needs something at the 3:14 mark..... (The vocals) not too sure what you mean about the mastering on the vocals ???
I'm glad you couldn't find any faults in the music But it needs attention me thinks,i think Rob has done superb on the vocals as always.... CHEERS BUDDI
Thanx again my friend
Deggsy
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Been there, done that. Really fine music, Deggsy. And always a thumbs up for Rob.
Just from a listener's perspective, I found the music and the vocals to be in competition somewhat (in terms of levels, which was in the foreground).
Hope that's helpful (not like I'm a qualified critic or anything...)
Valerie
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Slippy-T Suffering from MSGBoard RSI

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Hi Valerie ..
1st off loads of thanks for the comment input ..
Myself and Deggsy had a discussion about the the general sound of the
song and he asked me to send the vox onto him so he can rework the
music..
As I said at the top this is a 1st cut and is just to give the public an idea on how the song sounds..
Rework will be coming fairly soon..
Once again thanks for the comments from both you and Rogue ..
Rob 
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Hi Valerie,
thanx for the listen...:)i understand what you say and we will have a play around with it and adjust the mentioned levels...Fankoo for your comments Rob has an excellent voice.. big thumbs from me too...
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Well done you two.
You are getting mellow on me Rob rofl!!!! But this is vocally/lyrically
complex in a way that compliments your Slippy-T material very nicely
indeed, and the chorus is catchy in the extreme.
Now the piano and orchestral work really hits the spot. I assume that
this is your field Deggsy? You have created a fairly slow burning thing
here that builds in layers of complexity. I feel that there is a very
pleasing sense of 'balance' to the entire piece that goes beyond the
constraints of a 'collab'.....in other words it does not sound like a
meeting of two minds with differing styles, but rather a well developed
whole - as if you two have been working together for a lengthy
period, and know each other's strengths and weaknesses inside and out.
The musical mood, though commercial in structure interacts naturally
and organically with Rob's voice, and the production/post production
shines through on many levels.
Rob: I don't know if you would be interested in putting 'Third Normal Form' on the Collaborative Incendiaries' page m8?
It was in many ways one of the first C.I. projects, and it's obviously
dated now - we have both moved on and refined our talents since.
However it perhaps had a certain raw charm? and I've also done my best
to remaster it recently from the MP3, along with all the tracks from
'The First Is Ace, The Rest are Pants'.
If you want the track please let me know, I could email it to you. If
you would prefer this one to be kept as a 'back catalogue' piece though
(which may very well be the case) I will fully understand.
Ffabbia
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Just rated and commented. A doozy of a first cut. 
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