Posted: 03 December 2004 at 4:24pm | IP Logged

I've done a new track.  It might even be construed as slightly upbeat and happy.  Imagine that.  It's still a bit rough, and the vocal needs editing or redoing, but any comments appreciated.

Thanks.

http://www.mp3unsigned.com/showmp3.asp?mp3ID=8097&aid=84 1

Posted: 03 December 2004 at 8:01pm | IP Logged

Very impressive, nicely chilled.  Clear slightly haunting vocals which work really well.  Find myself really listening as to what direction your going to take the song in next. 

Great song!

Posted: 03 December 2004 at 10:48pm | IP Logged

Wow, thanks everyone for listening and for such a positive reaction.

I'm pleased with the guitars, I like that dreamy feel.  I'm thinking of adding some drums to it, coming in right from the first verse, but I can never make drums sound like drums.  I'm also having trouble getting the mix to work so that all the instuments get their own place to come through, and the vocal isn't quite right either.  I will have to stick at it, I guess.

I will probably have another go tonight.

Cheers.

Posted: 04 December 2004 at 1:29am | IP Logged

Hi jon

I really love this. Its up there with your other stuff. Its good to see that you can consistantly produce the goods.

I had a little trouble hearing the vocals clearly in places, I think Youth nailed it when he mentioned EQ.

Musically its beautiful. I dont know about adding drums to it tho? Perhaps put them on and let us hear them and give you feed back on them then.

I'll vote and comment as soon as I press post reply!

ROGUE

PS> Well done for getting Artist of the Month else where on the internet!!!!