Hi Stephin. Can't hear the vocal clearly at all, and the guitar sounds a wee bit flat-toned and slightly out of tune. Does sound like it's got some potential there though. I'll check back for updated recordings and new tracks. welcome to mp3unsigned, Sir.

Hi Stephin Just can't hear bro :( Too bad because it sounds like you've got a great tune here. The Tv in the back ground is kind of cool. I'm not sure you ment to have it in there but it almost makes it more real to me. I know what it's like not to have place or equipment to record. If all you've got is a mic bro just point it towards your mouth and strumm just a little softer. Hope to hear it again eric

Can't hear the lyrics, would be nice to, but I can hear you got a heart for what you do, keep it up and reach for your goals, welcome to the site. All the best Deborah Ivri