Cool rhythm! Hey, I just noticed rhythm doesn't have any REAL vowels... unless I spelled it wrong. Anyways, your bio states how you love writing and this is "lyrics driven music" so I was waiting for some lyrics when I realized that this is a pretty cool jam... but it left me wanting more (probably cause I was waiting for words.) I believe that if you had a lead guitar accenting throughout the song AND some of your words within this vibe... you'd have a GREAT tune.

Decent track. I'd prefer to hear the guitar dropped in the mix a bit and the drums brought right forward to push the groove a bit more. Bass guit is pretty non-existant too. Good track though. Really raw, gritty guitar sound. Good work.

The music has a great groove, and I like the sound of the guitar. Nice work Joe