Jaymz Lee Shaw (When i was young)

Reviewed by Encrypted Complex on (Monday, March 20, 2006) Rated 7.9 / 10
Category Rating
Track Structure 8
Interest 8
Melody 8
Performance 9
Lyrics 7
Enjoyment 7
Recording Quality 8
Commercial Appeal 8
Overall 7.9

Ok, here goes the first review of the morning, and i must say its nice to wake up to! (he says yawning) im going to start with the bad points if i may, as mentioned in the track comments by the artist himself, the vocals could be better, im not sure i like the vocals used they are however very melodic in some points and sounds very much like it could be an amazing track also mentioned was a re-recording on a personal level would be more than happy to review that to becuase this song really does have the potentional to be a very good track if some more time put into it i feel.

The track in my opinion should stay structured as it is, theres no need for drums in this song its powerful enough as an acoustic track. The guitar is recorded well and the strumming sounds great, there is enough varation in there to keep me intersted throughout.

With reguard to recording quality, its very good when looking at parts individually but some overall mastering of the track i get the feeling is needed, but if your planning to re-record a track then i guess this wont matter so much.

When talking about track structure its very good to sit here chill out and listen to this song, its one you can listen to over again and just kick back and relax without falling asleep to...musically i love acoustic stuff, its the best style for me, and this track has captured everything that i would look for in a acoustic track.

Final thoughts are this is a great track that i could listen to over again, gets a download from me, i would highly recomend this track to someone wanting to listen to a chilled track when your feeling a bit down. As for the vocals im not a huge fan of parts of the song, when i say parts i mean... PARTS as in only parts, some places there is a real feel of genius in there...then it loses it again, overall i would recomend this track and leave you with saying i would be more than happy to review the new version when and if it happens, check out this song guys and girls its an acoustic work of art.

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