Atom Tha Immortal (Rhyme)

Reviewed by V Dogg on (Saturday, June 25, 2005) Rated 9.4 / 10
Category Rating
Track Structure 10
Interest 10
Melody 9
Performance 8
Lyrics 10
Enjoyment 10
Recording Quality 9
Commercial Appeal 9
Overall 9.4

Okay, this was the track that made me a fan of Atom Tha Immortal.  By the way, you gotta love this guy's name.  But don't let the name fool you: This guy really does sound like a rapper out of the afterlife.  He's like me in a way: Produces his own beats, writes his own lyrics, and records his own songs.  Only he knows more and has more than I do, so yeah.  I HIGHLY recommend this artist to anyone who is looking for something different in hip hop.

So let's begin with what makes this track so great.  First off, listen to this song with HEADPHONES ON.  That way, you can hear the deep bassline and those tight adlibs.  The bassline is so thumping it makes your head bob in a hurry.  The melody is great too.  The drums are kickin'!  A nice pattern for those.  But it is Atom's lyrics which truly shine.  He makes several Bible references in this song and speaks every single word clearly and on beat!  That's simply amazing.  But Atom, I must note a error in your lyrics: Where it says "Fold my verses into a cube, new lyrics form in three-dimensions", you actually say "lyrics" first, then "verses" second.  But no really big deal there.  The chorus is a tight one as well.  Atom has a nice voice that people look for in hip hop.  But one more thing, Atom: If you rap a bit stronger in this song, it would make it better than it already is.  Ruach is a good example of a strong performance.

I have only one more thing to say to this great rapper: Keep rappin'!

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