Dark and darker. I love this man. also dig the way you used the guitar to give it like a middle east or somthing type feel to the song. Great job! rate Eric Bad Love Junkie

Dark subject matter allright, gives me the creeps thinking it could happen to me or someone I know. Production's good, and I really like that guitar tone and the rhyme scheme. Vocals devoid of emotion seem a bit strange given the nature of this piece, the guitar melody seems to be carrying all the "feeling", which may have been your intent. Interesting work, fellas! Can't say I "enjoyed" it, but certainly appreciate what you've done with the subject. Rated.

Can't remember the advice I gave... D'oh. Glad you could - this has got a good sound to it and the vocal sounds nice and crisp. Sinister subject of course and a tricky song to write lyrics to but I reckon you got the message out and hopefully nobody will get unreasonably upset by them. Was rather expecting a big hard lift in the vox but on 2nd thoughts maybe not, given the materiel. Take a rate boys on a good song.