Thank you guys :)

Hi Dave and Rich. Forgot to say it but a belated congratulations on hitting the top spot with this track. Every collaboration that you two do is always fantastic and Rich's vocals are stunning. PJ

Hi Dave & Rich, Sorry I was late on this one. This is really nice!! Absolutely love the music! Vocal melody line is nice too! Production is great! Thumbs up

Tony, thank you mate :) This was the refined version... just added a reverse snare to bridge the gap... the idea was to be raw and too the point so did not want to be traditional... Appreciate the time Tony! Cheers!

2nd listen Yes, 1:41 is a bit sudden. Maybe a bigger reverse cymbal into it would cover it...

David Bowie sneaking in here and there... works for me! I hear those transitions mentioned but maybe you've modified them because they don't disturb me too greatly. Builds and breaks down nicely. The piano tone change at the end was unexpected.

Hi Dave and Rich. I'm sorry a bit late getting to this, playing a little catch-up today. A little bit edgier than I'm used to from the two you. I really like the change in direction this one. As always the production is great. Rick’s vocals are in top form as well. Really nice story to this song. It seems to have come from the heart. Great job from both of you Eric

Hi Dave, Hope that things are great with you and I want to say that I am still looking forward to working with you. You always know how to bring out the very best in artists and Rich sounds excellent on this. I truly hope that my vote will push this higher up in the chart. Another top notch track. You're both fantastic. PJ

Sweet Collaboration fella's greatvocals are always Rich and set to a lovely muscial tune.

I have em Dave. I heard this transaction but in the heat of the moment I didn't care.

Sounds like the same guitar used on my collab with Christy :-) You two always come up with great music . Rich is so prolific- week after week he uploads something new and interesting. Lovely instrumentation throughout Dave - nice piano work particularly. Thumbs. James

Cheers Craig and Andy.... I over-looked that... its my fault!! I will have a look at it this weekend to see what i can do but i will need to hope rich has the vocal files kept?.. RIch does his own mixdowns! Appreciate the comments and glad you both liked! Thank you!

I heard it in the week dudes and was very impressed. Home now so i can comment. I agree with Craig about the transitions. The one about 1min41 is the main culprit. Ya need to get this fixed dudes cos it is an awesome song. Thumzup

What a wonderful track. I think this is the best track yet from the two of you, music and vocal compliment each other perfectly. My only crit would be the transition in and out of the chorus is a bit abrupt, but it's a minor niggle and doesn't stop this being fantastic. Rated, Craig.

The words and emotions flow from the track. Great compostion Dave, and you know it is when it grabs the heart of Rich and draws the lyrics out from the depths of his soul through his vocals. "..now i'm on this step i tripped upon.. " whoa...awesome, fellas! Loved the piano at the end wanders off my page ..love it :) Thumbs!

Nice collab Dave, Rich. Im not sure how much backing there was to begin with but what I'm hearing, guitars, bass, piano, synth, sounds cool, underneath Rich's voice. There's some nice gentle buildups, like the bass coming in at 1:59, and drums, and then just having piano at the end is a clever touch. A good song writing team.

Thank you both very much!! Appreciate the time and comments!

Brilliant, love it. Gibbo

This is great