At 18 years of age, she's a fresh face, with an even fresher voice.
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Please visit my myspace, to listen to my other songs- and possibly create a backing track for me?- Lol, just p/m to let me know, and I'll let you download it!
You have a great deal of potential. However, I don't believe this song is truly in the R&B genre. Without any production, it's kind of hard to give you an overall opinion. I think it needs some work; there are so many artists on this site who are looking to collab...perhaps you could explore that and get some music behind your wonderful lyrics.
Continued success and keep working hard,